Full Developmental Edit

A deep structural analysis of your completed manuscript.

If you’ve finished a draft but aren’t sure whether the story works—or why it doesn’t—this service provides a clear, comprehensive breakdown of your manuscript and exactly how to improve it.

Full Developmental Edit

What you’ll get

  • A big-picture analysis of your story, including:

    • Narrative structure and pacing

    • Character development and arcs

    • Genre alignment and reader expectations

    • Stakes, tension, and progression

  • A custom story blueprint showing how to restructure and strengthen your story

  • In-line feedback highlighting key issues and opportunities for revision

  • A detailed editorial report outlining strengths, weaknesses, and next steps

Why this matters

Fixing a manuscript without understanding what’s broken leads to endless rewrites.

This process gives you clarity—so every revision you make moves your story forward.

Best suited for

  • Completed first drafts

  • Writers who feel “something isn’t working”

  • Authors ready to revise seriously and structurally

Investment

$2,500 CAD (up to 100,000 words)